Congratulations goes out to RealHunterWolfe he has been scouted. This is some great music, and here you deserve it. Like, seriously.
Pros: Great guitar tone. I love that tone so much. I always love Schecter's sound, and this is just great. Next, EZDrummer. I use EZdrummer myself, and commonly use the Metal EZX, but this doesn't really sound like my sound, which I like. Whomever did the vocals did a great job, because it just screams PUNK ROCK! The lyrics are great too. You did a good job.
Cons: Not too many, I think my biggest problem is the lack of solo. The reason I have an issue with this is because I'm a Metallica fan, and punk isn't Metallica. Next is the reverse symbol into the crash. The issue there is that it sounds like the same sample, which sounds fine but it feels choppy, and I don't particularly like it. And, finally, the bass. I understand if you don't have a bass guitar, but come on dude, you coulda used a bass that was a teeny bit better. Nah, I kid, my issue is that the bass feels missing. I know it's there, but it doesn't feel strong enough.
Overall, for a first on NG, you did a very good job. Hats off to you, especially for creating something this catchy, at least for the rhythm track. And, hey, if you ever want someone to give you some tips on certain things, or just want to try collabing with me, you can ask me, and I'm happy to jump on to help you out in anyway. 4/5 from me. Keep it up!
Take care!
~AlphaStorm